If practiced incorrectly or with excessive force, it can cause internal pain or injury.
Should the story focus more on the leading up to this?
stepped forward, his shadow looming over her. He took a heavy breath, his muscles coiling like a spring. With a sudden, explosive grunt, he launched a straight punch. His fist moved with the speed of a striking viper, aimed directly at the softest part of her torso.
The impact was a dull thud that vibrated through the entire courtyard.
If practiced incorrectly or with excessive force, it can cause internal pain or injury.
Should the story focus more on the leading up to this?
stepped forward, his shadow looming over her. He took a heavy breath, his muscles coiling like a spring. With a sudden, explosive grunt, he launched a straight punch. His fist moved with the speed of a striking viper, aimed directly at the softest part of her torso.
The impact was a dull thud that vibrated through the entire courtyard.